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PostSubject: A small 3 page short story I wrote   Sun Feb 07, 2010 4:07 am

I wrote a bit of a short story to get my creative juices flowing, it took roughly 2 weeks of writers block, making mistakes, and backtracking to finish it. There is likely a buttload of errors in it, so bear with me.

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PostSubject: Re: A small 3 page short story I wrote   Sun Feb 07, 2010 11:02 am

Went a little too just as planned for my taste.
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PostSubject: Re: A small 3 page short story I wrote   Sun Feb 07, 2010 3:16 pm



Seriously though, I see your point. Maybe i'll fix it up a bit in that regard and repost it. Any of you guys have ideas?
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PostSubject: Re: A small 3 page short story I wrote   Mon Feb 08, 2010 10:15 am

Hmmm.
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